Improvement

When we first filmed and edited our movie there were a lot of mistakes. The lighting was not right as we took really long to film one of the scenes and therefore it became dark and that did ruined the mise-en-scene. We also did not get good comments on our titles as it was boring and we had black background with white writing. We also ended up changing a lot of things within the scene.

Changes include: The initial idea of our movie got changed as we lost another group member. Therefore it was up to me and Oraldo to change our movie ideas and film and edit on our own. We changed the script and synopsis.

The movie now is about a teenage boy (Oraldo) who owes a drug dealer (Dahir) money. He goes out of his way to live a life of crime and steals money in every way possible. He ends up following a girl who comes out of college into a dark alley way and steals her purse.

The background we used for our titles changed to different shots of money as that is what our movie revolves around and the title of the movie remained the same (money matters). We changed a lot of things within our script and got rid of the voice over as it was no longer needed. The story is clear enough for the audience to understand it without a voice over.

At the end we ended up with better comments from our peers as well as our teachers.